I haven’t posted anything for Creative Wednesdays for a while because I’m working on a short story collection that I’m hoping to get published some day, and does anybody know if publishers will take collections where some of the pieces have been published in online journals? Anyway, I love writing poetry even though I’m not particularly good at it and it’s my birthday dammit, so today, I’ve decided to share a poem with you that I wrote recently. It’s called Defying Gravity and it’s about love and hope.
Defying Gravity
We spoke of death and life,
Me and you, my child
(More precious to me than a single perfect seashell
Or the vast ocean contained within it)
And you asked, Why carry on?
I remember that you etched futility into the earth
With clenched fists
And said
Fall the petals, fall the leaves,
Fall the tears, fall the knees.
And I replied
But the flowers still turn their faces to the sun,
The trees still strive for the moon,
Winter is the prelude to spring.
Dry your eyes,
Lock your knees; defy gravity.
I scuffed the earth clean
With an open palm
And etched both our hearts into it
So deeply that they couldn’t be erased
By neither you, my child, nor me.
Happy birthday, hon. Wishing you ALL the best. I’ll toast for you now.
(Okay Donkey Press, though I’m not sure what they’re accepting right now. River’s Potter’s Grove Press.)
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Thank you on both counts!
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Kisses back.
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this is outstanding!
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Oh, thank you!
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absolutely my pleasure to read…….
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.Happy Birthday 🥳 may you have another year of continuing success with your writing ✍🏻
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Thank you!❤️
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As far as I know, publishing some of the stories online shouldn’t be a problem. The going theory (I think) is that it means you’ll have a base of people who will be interested in the book.
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Hey, happy birthday!🥳❣ I feel this way about my daughter also.
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Beautiful. Happy happy birthday, Suzanne!!!
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Thank you!
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That’s beautiful, Suzanne. I’m so used to your humor that this was a touching surprise.
I’ve heard that some agents and publishers will accept previously published pieces, others not. It’s’ something that needs to be clarified on a case by case basis.
And thank you for putting your book in the side bar!! Now I can purchase it. 😀
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I really appreciate that❤️
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Is it on Amazon? I couldn’t find it.
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The link on my website is to Kobo e-reader. It’s on Amazon.com though: The Dome, Suzanne Craig-Whytock. Please let me know if you can’t get it–my publisher has been having some issues, but I can send you a copy myself otherwise:-)
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I’ll look again. I found “Smile” but it shows as unavailable. I didn’t see The Dome at all. I like to buy my books so that the reviews show up as verified purchases, and that way I also support my author friends with my pennies. 🙂 Now that I know what I’m looking for, I’ll be more persistent. I’ll get there.
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Here’s the Amazon link I’m pretty sure
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Hey. Thank you!
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That’s beautifully written. Good luck with the story collection. And – a slightly belated happy birthday!
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Thank you!
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Nice poem. Maybe you’re better than you think.
You made it around the sun, one more time. Yay.
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Always a thing to celebrate 😊
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Wow! What an absolutely stunning poem, Suzanne. Holy crap, I love it so much. Happy birthday!! I hope you treated yourself to something special today to celebrate how fabulous you are! 🥳
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Thank you—spent the day with my daughter. Such a treat!
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Happy Birthday! I hope you had a great day!
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Happy birthday, Suzanne! Are you sure you’re not a poet? This is wonderful. I hope you have a great Birthday Week… that’s a thing, isn’t it?
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Thanks😊 And yes, I’m planning to milk this for a few more days!
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As it has been written, so shall it be done. 🙂
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Beautiful poem! And, Potter’s Grove might take a few pieces that have already been published before. They took 2-3 of my short stories that were already published in lit mags. They just wouldn’t take a large number because they wanted original stuff, which is understandable:) Cheers!
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Thanks—good to know!
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Happy Belated Birthday!!! 🙂
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Thank you!❤️
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🤗🤗🤗
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Lovely poem. 💕
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Thank you❤️
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Happy belated birthday and, as an old English major, I can say with some authority that you are good at writing poetry.
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Thank you, from this old English major!
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happy belated bdy, dear! we are so lucky for you. love this other side of you — good luck with selling short stories – love them, but dunno anything about publishing them…
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Thanks. I wrote this for my daughter—I’m so happy other people liked it too😊
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This poem is so moving and beautiful. I was starting to get a little verklempt, and I am serious.
Belated Birthday Wishes! I hope it was wonderful, despite everything.
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Thank you. It actually was a lovely birthday, spent with my favourite people😊
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